Wednesday, August 4, 2010

How to Have a Great Editorial Call

The team working on my novel includes me, my in-house editor from Thomas Nelson, and a freelance editor with a lot of experience in the field, especially with historicals. I can't say enough good things about my first phone call with my editors yesterday.

When I received my editorial letter last Friday, I was very grateful that it was only seven pages long! (If you've heard much about editorial letters, you know that they can sometimes run as long as fifteen or twenty pages.) I was also very happy to see the clarity and precision with which my editors identified areas in which we could refine certain aspects of the novel. Some of these suggestions were things I had suspected on a subliminal level, but hadn't quite been able to put my finger on. Others were subtle improvements I hadn't considered that would ensure the credibility of every aspect of the story.

In a couple of areas, I agreed with their observation about the story, but had a different solution to propose. This made me nervous. After all, I'm a debut author. How would they react to my suggestions? Having never participated in an editorial call, I had no idea what to expect.

I was happy and relieved to discover that my editors really mean it when they say we are a team. They appreciated my openness to their suggestions and solutions, and they offered me the same open-minded attitude when I proposed some of my ideas.

So, even in my newness to the editorial process, I think I may have a few tips for anyone who might be nervous about that initial editorial call. Here's how I prepared to have a great conversation with my editors:

1) I took time to appreciate the blessing of their input. It's too easy to take someone's excellent advice for granted. But I considered how different things might have been, if my editors were not so insightful and intelligent. And then I wallowed in gratitude! :-) I also expressed my appreciation to them. From what I've heard, authors can sometimes be a royal pain in the rear. Editors may not always get grateful responses for their hard work and effort to help. It's good to thank them, as we would like to be encouraged ourselves.

2) When I came across a suggested solution that didn't strike me as the right fit (and there were only two or three of those), I thought hard about how to address the underlying story or character issue in a different way. Everyone brings a strength to the table when the editorial process begins. Editors bring a wealth of experience and a fresh perspective on the story. This fresh perspective is a wonderful help for an author who has been working on the story for a year or more. At the same time, the author's long immersion in the story has given her in-depth knowledge of the mechanics of the plot and how the whole concoction works together. The author may come up with some innovative solutions in response to the editor's suggestions.

3) I was well-prepared. I had gone through the entire letter marking it up with my response, most of which was "Yes! Agreed! Great idea! Here's how I'm going to do that." I then numbered my points in the order I wanted to make them, so I could address the simplest things first and leave time to address the more complex issues at the end. As we went through the letter, I referred the editors to the page we were discussing so we could all follow the line of the conversation without confusion. Sometimes, the issues under discussion are pretty complicated. I knew it would be better to have a paper reference in front of me to keep me focused.

But there's one element for which I can't take any credit when it comes to having a great editorial call. And that is:

4) Have great editors.

I have no way of knowing how many editors are as good as mine. But from my experience with editors I've met at conferences, I suspect there are many good editors out there. I don't want to be a Pollyanna, and sure, there may be rotten apples in any profession, or people who are less expert than others. But without any effort, I can think of at least six editors I've met who were obviously kind, very intelligent and well-read. So my hope for all of you is that when your book makes it into the editorial process, you get one of these great editors.

Not all publishing houses follow this procedure in which they first send an editorial letter, then follow up with a call. Some friends have told me that they just get a phone call, or perhaps the call precedes the letter. Personally, I really like the way Thomas Nelson does it, because it allowed me time to ruminate on the suggestions before we talked.

I hope this is helpful! What do you think? Have you heard other good stories about editorial experiences? Or perhaps you know authors who eventually realized that their editors were correct about many things, even if the initial editorial response was a shock?

21 comments:

ReMARKable Palate said...

Great post! I'm glad to hear that it went well. When we last saw each other, you were a tad worried about getting the letter. I'm sure this means that the novel will be FABULOUS when it's in my grubby little hands!

ComfortWriter said...

Congratulations! Thanks for stopping by this evening.

Katie Ganshert said...

Wow!! What an informative post!! I'm sitting here reading it, thinking, "I want that to be me!" Thomas Nelson sounds amazing to work with. Their reptuation is wonderful. What a great way to go through the process. I definitely like the idea of a letter first and then a phone call. Thanks for sharing this, Rosslyn. I'm glad it went well!

DL Hammons said...

Peeking over your shoulder as you go through this process is so amazing. Thank you for the access! I was so glad to hear that the phone call was a positive experience! :)

Wendy Paine Miller said...

You are such a classy woman. I love it. I love connecting with people like you who are respectful, willing to grow, quick to let the positive soak in.

Such a cool account of working with your editors. I agree, I like the way TN sends a letter first. Smart way of communicating.

Congratulations.
~ Wendy

Richard Mabry said...

I've been fortunate. In the case of all three of my novels, my editor at Abingdon, Barbara Scott, and I were pretty much always on the same page.

I definitely agree that input from others can only make a novel better. And in my case--and I suspect in yours, as well--agent Rachelle Gardner had suggestions for me before the work was ever submitted.

patti said...

I think God has blessed you immeasurably, that you have listened to the Holy Spirit, such a wise and wonderful Counselor.

Like you, I have been blessed with these great calls. You are so wise to have prepped for THE EVENT.

And I KNOW we are gonna be reading a GREAT BOOK soon!!!

Praise God, dear one, and thank you for sharing.

patti

Terri Tiffany said...

Thank you for sharing this information. It is so interesting to me to read what actually happens after a book is sold--my first response was oh no! It would be very nervewracking to go through and yet you sound as though you were very organized and thorough and had great people!

Jan Cline said...

Great job Rosslyn. I look forward to the day I will have an editor to work with! Im printing out this post to keep for that occasion. Thanks for the tips.

Joanne@ Blessed... said...

Wow. Thanks so much for this. I am already biting my nails over my first editorial phone call.

Your words left me encouraged. From one newbie to another, I look forward to hanging onto your coat tails Rosslyn!

Hope to meet you at the next Wordserve dinner!

Carol said...

Sounds like things are going great for you and ONLY 7 pages....how wonderful. Congrats and best wishes as you continue your process and progress.

Kat Harris said...

It has been so much fun following your adventures through the world of publishing.

I'm taking notes in hopes that maybe someday soon I'll need to study up.

Mary Aalgaard said...

Thank for the glimpse into the editing process. This sounds so exciting!

Rosslyn Elliott said...

Thanks, everybody! It was a nerve-wracking couple of days waiting for the call, so I was very glad to have it come to a happy ending. :-)

Latayne C Scott said...

I am so proud of you -- you understand that editors are partners. I think you are going to have a wonderful writing career!

Samantha Bennett said...

Great tips! Haven't reached this stage yet, but I will put a mental bookmark on this post!

Susan J. Reinhardt said...

Hi Rosslyn -

I admire the way you organized your thoughts and presented yourself. No doubt the editors were pleased.

Blessings,
Susan :)

D.J. Hughes said...

This is a great post! Everything you say is so true! Editors do bring a fresh perspective, and everyone brings something unique to the table. It's so important to listen, thoughtfully, to all the input and suggestions. How wonderful it must be to have such highly qualified and well-read persons read your work and take the time to offer honest feedback. That's hard to find sometimes in the pre-published world. I agree with you that a letter first is helpful in allowing time for the author to digest all the suggestions and then prepare appropriate responses. What a wonderful process and journey you're on. I am very happy for you. And I'm looking forward to reading your first novel!

Jen said...

I'm a new follower and what a fantastic post! I love getting to learn the process of everything people go through!!! You gave us up close and personal access and I love it! Thanks for sharing a bit of your world!

Warren Baldwin said...

Thanks for bringing us along on your journey.

Cassandra Frear said...

Hi there!

I'm married to an editor! Now that I've become a writer, I respect him so much. I understand just how good he is at what he does.

Aside from my husband, I think the relationship with an editor is very complex. Each one is so different. It's hard for me to think of ways to describe them all.