Most writers have heard the two self-labels we often use to describe our writing processes:
PLOTTERS are writers who plan out their plots in advance. They often outline. They do not feel secure without a guide to help them progress from beginning to end in an organized way. They often like to build in the four-act-structure to their works from the very beginning, so they don't have to go back and rewrite as much.
PANTSERS (short for "seat-of-the-pantsers") write their novels more improvisationally. They like the freedom of being able to take their stories in any direction as they write. They find outlines too restrictive. Sometimes they feel that outlines make their writing too stale and predictable. They thrive on the fresh discoveries they make as they write. They are willing to do more structural rewrites in exchange for their freedom in the process.
I am a plotter. I must have an outline to give me faith that I will actually finish the novel someday.
However, I use a process that preserves the freshness in the writing to walk a line between plotting and pantsing. I call it "the Butterfly Effect."
My initial outlines are simple. I write a sentence to describe what happens in each chapter. Sometimes, I start by knowing only the major plot arc, and composing a sentence-level outline for only the first ten or fifteen of thirty chapters.
My initial outlines are also NOT SO GOOD. :-)
If you saw my initial outline for the novel just contracted by Thomas Nelson, you would think "what on earth?" That crude outline bears very little resemblance to the final novel. In the first outline, my plot is heavy handed and vague. Many characters who appear in the final version of the novel are not present in that first twelve-chapter outline.
My outlines change as I develop each chapter because of the Butterfly Effect.
You've probably heard of this theory too: the idea that changing one small aspect of the world can cause a ripple effect that leads to major changes later. If you travel back in time and accidentally step on a butterfly, you may change the course of history.
I could not write well without allowing for a Butterfly Effect in my outlines.
When I write each chapter, I allow unplanned events and characters to enter my storyline if I sense they are good for the scene and don't ruin the overall major plot arc. In an early chapter of my debut novel, I needed additional conflict in a scene to keep it exciting. In walked a character I had never anticipated, to jazz things up a little. That character ended up creating a a significant storyline that enriched the whole novel. My outline metamorphosed into something more substantial and sophisticated because of the Butterfly Effect of that character's presence in the story.
Some novelists are truly PANTSERS and remain pantsers forever. They have an intuitive sense of plot and pacing that allows them to produce good work without a conscious plan.
But I've also met a lot of beginning novelists who stay in the pantser mode because on some level, they are afraid to try to work with an outline. The result is that they get stuck in endless rewrites and give up out of sheer frustration with the unwieldiness of their plot structure and the digression and slow pacing that resulted from a haphazard approach. Sometimes, they write themselves into a corner, plotwise, and give up because writer's block sets in.
If these things have ever happened to you, you might want to try working with a bare, sentence-level chapter outline and allowing for the Butterfly Effect to keep your writing fresh. And don't be afraid to let that first outline stink!
What are your experiences with outlines? Have they ever worked for you? Are you, like me, a die-hard plotter whose palms get clammy at the thought of no initial outline? If you're a pantser, do you end up rewriting a lot to shape the plot and pace, or does your intuition guide you pretty well in that first draft?
Saturday, August 7, 2010
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Rosslyn, I've proudly called myself a "pantser," but that's changing. For my first two published novels, I knew how they were going to start, what would drive them, and how they were going to finish (but never the villain until I wrote the last few chapters). Then, with the novel finished, I wrote a synopsis. No sweat.
I had to be a bit more structured for novel number three, but still managed to do it "seat of the pants" style.
Now I'm looking for a contract for my next novel, and to do that I'm having to write a synopsis before finishing the book. That was like pulling teeth for me, but I've managed to do it. But I reserve the right to change the villain and the ending once I get to that point--and if I have a contract for publication, I'll bet the editor will accept that.
Thanks for bringing this up.
Yeah, Im one of the pansters that is trying to change. I want to stick to some sort of outline process. Just haven't figured out what works best for me yet. Im fairly new at this - only on my second novel. Great tips.
I loved this post!!!! First off the image is breath taking and just gave me some awesome inspiration for my current novel!! So thank you :) Do you mind if I steal it??
I'm a panster, there are times where I love it and times where I hate it. I'll say this much, I'm a panster on the outside but on the inside I might actually be an outliner. Before I write the characters and I talk it out amongst ourselves, learning about one another, the stakes we're against, the big reveal, the issue at hand, so in the end while I've not written anything down everything is written step by step in my mind.
So what does that really make me?
Wow! I LOVE how you described this.
We all need a little flutter; you're giving it, girl!
You soar now, okay????
P
I wrote TLR2H as a pantster, but there are things about plot points and arcs I wish I'd known then.
Now I consider myself an 80 percent pantster/20 percent plotter.
I don't write down a sentence for each chapter, but I'll write down my vision for the opening problem and then generic details of the first and second plot points, climax and resolution. From there, I let the characters have at it.
Great questions! I spend a fair amount of time "pre-writing" in my thoughts, jotting down ideas here and there. But once I'm ready to get started, I usually pen out a rough outline - just to give myself some direction.
It's always amazing to me to see the writing process take shape from the initial ideas to the final draft. Sometimes my outlines are detailed, with research already done, so I end up spending very little time on re-writing - just like you said!
At other times, I sit in front of a blank computer screen, with jumbled ideas wrestling for attention, and I take off from there and see where we go. Sometimes nothing worthwhile comes of it. But sometimes a new thought or idea emerges that is worth devoting some more time to.
I actually love the rewriting processing. It's energizing to me. But for the most part, I write essays, so I am not very experienced with writing fiction. I love to read it though!
Thanks for another thought-provoking post!
I'm SO like you Rosslyn. I cannot write without a plot outline. It freaks me out. I love how you describe the Butterfly Effect (excellent movie, by the way). My final drafts rarely ever look like that first outline. So many things end up changing throughout.
Great post!
It doesn't surprise me that this is very much how I go about writing a novel. I love this description.
Going to go tweet.
~ Wendy
Yes, I'm an outliner too. But I'm learning that it may NOT actually prevent major rewrites! :-) As much as I'd like to make sure I get things right the first time around, on a basic level I think that the planning can help keep us from spinning our wheels as you mentioned. But ultimately, those in-house editors can and will rip our well-laid plans to shreds and require us to take our novels to the next level!
OH thank you for this! I think you have described what exactly what I do! I make this really vague short outline for each chapter--I plot a major idea and course for the book, MC and theme and then off I go and let it develop as I do it often adding in people I never expected to but keeping within the main idea.
This is similar to my process. The butterfly effect is a great way to look at it. I recently had to write a synopsis about a book I haven't written, and it was so tough for me.
Thanks for contributing to the discussion, everybody! It's cool to discover that several of you seem to operate in a similar way.
Richard, that's very informative. I hope I don't have to do it in the future. Writing a synopsis is harder than sketching out a skeleton outline!
Jen - I'm glad you liked that image. Feel free to re-use it.
Jody - I hear ya. :-)
Rosslyn, fun to see you earlier today (on my blog), and great post. I think I'm a little of each, though, like others here (and as a newer novelist), still trying to find the perfect radio of plotting vs. pantsering. :) I LOVE the idea of the Butterfly Effect. I'm going to keep that in mind as I progress through my WIP!
It's so funny that you posted this because I have a similar themed post scheduled for Thursday. I amended my post to include a link to your article because I enjoyed your descriptions of the process and thought it complimented what I was trying to get across. :)
Hi Rosslyn. I came here because DL Hamnmons said we should stop by. This is a wonderful post. I have now become your newest follower.
Nice to meet ya!
Personally I do outline, but I keep it very basic and try to only use it loosely, allowing the plot and characters to grow on their own a bit.
I like how you said that first sketchy outline makes you think the story to the end which ensures that you actually finish it. That seems like a good plan. The best I've ever done with an "outline," is using notecards for characters, scenes, and dialogue for the drama I'm writing. It does help me plan for how it will all resolve at the end.
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