Thursday, October 15, 2009

Dust of Snow

The way a crow
Shook down on me
The dust of snow
From a hemlock tree

Has given my heart
A change of mood
And saved some part
Of a day I had rued.


This short poem by Robert Frost has always been one of my favorites. It pops into my head every now and then, when my heart receives an unexpected change of mood.

On the quiet day when the poet passes under the tree, he is preoccupied with his regrets, involuntarily reliving dark events in his mind. A whirring of wings sends freezing powder down his neck, inside the collar of his coat. He flinches. Perhaps he is angry, wondering for a moment what new challenge the world has thrown his way.

He looks up to see the crow, its bright eye glinting, shuffling its claws through the line of snow that glazes the branch of the hemlock. It unfurls its wings with a quick motion, sending more snow cascading down onto the man's head.

With a muttered oath, he brushes at the snow, frantic to remove it from his hair before it can melt and leave him wet and cold. His gloved hands bat ineffectually at his head.

His movements slow, then halt. He chuckles. He laughs. His head tilts back. He looks up at the crow once more, then walks on, his step swinging freely, his mouth curving upwards.



I have my own hemlock, the dark shadow that looms over me, the poisonous whisper that slips into my mind when I'm off guard.

But I also receive the dust of snow, the unexpected renewing and cleansing, the call out of the darkness of my own thoughts.

"Look!" says the dust of snow. "Look how silly you are, with your whispering voices and your mood. This is a hemlock tree, it's true, but see how I cover it and soften it. See how even a rough-voiced crow can carry me on its wings! See how the hemlock tree stands trapped in its own roots, while I am everywhere. You have only to walk away from the hemlock, and on into the snowy brightness of the day."

And I say, yes, I am very stupid. And I laugh.

7 comments:

Eileen Astels Watson said...

Wow, this is beautiful how you analysed that poem. I'm such a rotten poem reader, I never get the whole of them. I'm thinking poetry is the most concise writing of all!!!

Wendy @ All in a Day's Thought said...

I loved this post! Especially how you ended it. :D

Poetry is a motivator for writing, isn't it?

For some reason every time my eye saw the word crow I stopped. I've been watching the new show Flash Forward and I kept thinking of it...it's good.
~ Wendy

Susan said...

Lovely post. I've been trying to infuse some poetry into our daily life. I consider myself seriously poetically challenged due in part to an exclusive diet of Shel Silverstein in the early years and nothing until tackling it as homework in high school. I hope that early and often exposure will help the boys love it with ease.

Anyway, Xavier and I have been reading Frost's Gathering Leaves each morning at breakfast. Then we do a sort of call and response game with hand motions for a stanza or two--until food is cooked. I figure if the kid can learn nursery rhymes why not other poetry?

I think Frost is so well suited to this age. Simple, observational but (as your post shows) full of many levels to ponder. I'll have to add Snow Dust to the list for later.

Anne L.B. said...

I love your embelishment on this, Rosslyn.

My two teen girls are studying poetry right now. Today's assignment will be to read your blog. I might even get them to comment! :D

Rosslyn Elliott said...

Susan, that's a great idea to start teaching Frost to your little ones. I'll have to do that too. I believe poetry is crucial for hardwiring a sense of rhythmic language.

I just realized that the way I titled the post made it look as if the title of the poem was "Snow Dust," when in fact it's "Dust of Snow." Oops! Sorry about that. :-) I just changed it to avoid confusion.

Rosslyn Elliott said...

Anne, please do get them to comment if they will! That would be great.

Debbie said...

You really give me things to think about and I appreciate that. I used to love poetry. I remember my 4th grade teacher would read our class poems and his voice dramatized the action. "The Wreck of the Hespress" comes to mind. We were all so silent as we listened. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on poems. I think it's good for our minds to be exposed to literature and poetry too.

Blessings and thank you for your visits and comments on Heart Choices. I really appreciate it.

Debbie